假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,。作文中共有10處語言錯誤,，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加,、刪除或修改,。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(N) ，并在其: 下面寫出該加的詞,。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉,。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞,。
注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
As my third year of high school life has come, I felt a little stressful, because I want to enter a better college, and my scores worry me. I have made my mind to study harder. Firstly, I need to improving my weak subjects. I decide to go over the important knowledges and ask my classmates for help. My good friend Lily is very patient. With her help, I will make a great progress. Secondly, the exam papers hand out every time, I will scan my mistakes and make sure what to make them right. Finally, I will make fully use of my spare time. I believe the aim will make you stronge
